<Edit> Moved one of the renders to scraps and updated this one to be larger. Also changed the hair to a lambert buuut.... eh. I think the only way it's going to look any better is if I unwrap it correctly =__= urp... well, I was going to research proper unwrapping anyway, so might as well try... </Edit>
This is the last half decent render I made at the time of the critique, so I won't bother to load the rest (do to size and crappiness xD; ) and I'll fiddle with the resolution settings that a few people suggested (thanks guys!) This is a better view of her face and alittle better size than the last at least. Again... bigger soon! and also I'll mess with some of the textures maybe and make a few bits not so shiney. Thanks for looking!